Shitty Writing n02: This one is slightly less bad

Down came the man with the eye of the land 

Twirling his guns and taking upon him the dreams 

That the kids all sang about in the fire along the shore

And that the new king sought to destroy 

A bird flies over the tower of flame 

Signaling the arrival of a terrible sand 

A man ,unrivaled madness of canaan 

Said to have the power of the earth in his sight

A Lord, sitting upon the stand 

Frightening the kings with his sleight of hand

How can he see with one eye in the dark?

Asked the king about the patch over the lid

How can you aim when the trigger is on your head?

Asked the king who’s guards have fled

I am not the one that takes the shot 

Said the lord, settling on the spot

Take it upon yourself to right your wrong

And give your life to me, Avalon

For a live revolves around the actions 

And earth only forgives benefactors

A shot is heard, the king is dead

Revolver now sits upon the throne, a Lord of dread

The dreams live on, through the sound of thunder

As the Lords fly in, and give applause to their leader

The Overlord, sitting upon the mountain 

Retiring at last, for his wounds took him asunder 

It was time to make the system anew

And here, his role Revolver knew

The king of Avalon will become the highest Lord

And finally, his element-less powers won’t be ignored

But only one obstacle kept him from the throne of want

The Thunderlord, a man of insatiable heart 

Beloved by all, feared by most

The Thunderlord knew his time had come 

The Overlord will be chosen over the next one day

And the times would call upon a vote to pay

And as the night comes, the Revolver strolls near the river

Until he is approached by a smiling drifter

It was the Warlord, an old man with a senile smile

And the one to give the Revolver his one eye

It is time for you to take the crown

For I have no strength to fight the crowd 

The Thunderlord is beloved

But your aim is true

If the Lords see the bullets ripe with blood

Their fear will be your gratitude

The revolver stocked up on his trusty powder 

And called upon his rival Thunder

A smile, a hand shake 

A wish for the best man to win

A bullet rips, and he does not understand

The Revolver sees his blood on his hands

The eye screams for its maker 

And the Warlord comes to take plunder

The old body is no more, and the Revolver is not a Lord anymore

Thunder stands tall, over the mountain, as the Song sings the tune

Of the new Warlord, Revolved, and his rule

For the dead was done, and Thunder clapped

The Lords were to be no more, and the time of freedom rang true

Each bullet ripped through

The Flesh of the Lords

As thunder struck down their homes

And the screams of the Song called them home

Towards the fall to their doom

The trio stood atop the fallen bodies

As they have successfully won their war

The Thunderlord and The Revolver end their tale

With the Song singing of their betrayal for their use

The people are now free from the Lords

And the time has come for Men to choose

To live atop the fields of fray

And build the dreams of the children anew

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